The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releva

The diagrams illustrate the process and usage of tool to manufacture cement and how it is then used for the production of concrete.

Overall, the steps consist of five main stages and some machines are involved in making cement. However, concrete is created using one machine only.

To be more specific, limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder before combing both materials in a mixer. Then, the mixed substances enter the rotating heater where they would expose to the heat. After coming out from the heater, it would be crushed into smaller pieces through grinder. Finally, the production of cement is completed after packaging in bags.

To make concrete, a small minority (15%) of processed cement is added in the concrete mixer, together with a quarter of sand and half of gravel using shovel. Not to mention, the water (10%) is poured as well. As the 4 ingredients are inside in correct proportion, the concrete mixer is then rotated to clockwise direction for the manufacture of concrete.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (4 votes)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96449704142 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58131983148 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644970414201 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9090246211 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256318004877 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900120304401 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879226115321 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166224584338 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798848927072 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.