The diagrams illustrate the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The given process diagrams illustrate the steps and materials which are occupied by the cement-making production along with the processing of making concrete to build sculpture.
Overall, it can be deemed that the cement is made by eight steps while the mixing of concrete is read by four types of ingredients.
First of all, in first diagram limestone and clay go through a cub and all are made by powder then all powder moves into a mixer which looks like a big pipe. After that, the mixed powder turns into a rotating heater which is warmed by fire. After this stage, all of the mixing drop on a grinder to grind which becomes in cement and then put in cement which are ready for sale bag. In second process, a tiny portion of cement, no more than 10% water, 25 per cent sand and 50 per cent gravel which is occupied by small stones all are going in a large concrete mixer to assist making building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ch is warmed by fire. After this stage, all of the mixing drop on a grinder to grind which...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, then, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28224225259 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4985935052 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232584139376 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120303492712 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108991601312 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185692669589 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103235832632 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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