The diagrams show changes in a student common room.
The given outlines depict the modifications of several student common room amenities during a span of five years. As can be seen from both outlines, a majority of facilities situated at the top of the student room seemed unchanged after 5 consecutive years, except an adding microwave in the position of the former bench.
Firstly, two 7-piece table sets that stayed at the center of the room were replaced by a 9-piece rectangular table set, with two remaining 7-piece table sets. Besides a 7-piece table set at the bottom left corner of the room is a new bench for laptops, three armchairs and television are adjacent to a Bench for laptops.
Secondly, a previous refrigerator was substituted by a drinks machine from the bottom right corner of the room to between an armchair and a refrigerator. The main entrance at the right-hand side was unmoved. Finally, six facilities at the top of the room were unchanged over 5 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...e in the position of the former bench. Firstly, two 7-piece table sets that sta...
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Suggestion:
... are adjacent to a Bench for laptops. Secondly, a previous refrigerator was su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85534591195 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78180871248 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9023536315 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146258605655 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722829853814 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623982677644 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101821561256 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624269683761 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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