Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
In many parts of the world, having extra hours in workplaces becomes a viral trend among the masses, which will benefit the economy. Conversely, a school of thought holds a belief that this trend can cause many serious troubles to each society and decrease the living standard of ordinary dwellers. Working can bring more promotional opportunities to people, ensure high-paid jobs and enjoy their majors.
On the one hand, teenagers tend to have more extra workload because this can be an easy way to get promotions in their workplaces where hard-working was considered as a determinant factor. Having more responsibilities, workers may not only utilize them to cultivate their relevant-job skills and their expertise but also show their willingness to employers who can lift them out of the entry-level jobs. However, this trend will create the deterioration of family time when workers lack time to play or interact with family members, which decreases their living standards.
On the other hand, high-paid jobs entail a host of strenuous working hours, workers who want to achieve may devote their spare time to have them. To be more specific, employees have scores of private demands, ranging from buying new clothes to granting expensive tuition fees for their children studying at prestigious schools, which can be a motivation to work more extra hours. Therefore, employees may not have enough time to unwind stress and relax, which can cause many common mental illnesses in this day and age.
Finally, a host of employees enjoy working with their dream jobs which can be considered as their means of life, which creates characters and identities of them. Living with passion and industriousness is the best way to undergo and surpass many challenges in life, bringing to workers not only an abundant budget but also a sense of pleasure when they feel their devotion is valuable to the development of the world. And these reasons will drain the time and health of workers if they pursuit far-fetched ideas which cannot be achieved by themselves.
In conclusion, getting promotions, landing well-paid jobs and enjoying passion are three justifications for the increase of working overtime in many countries. Hence, the government should play a tremendous role in balancing the time between working and relaxing by enacting several policies, limiting extra hours, as well as reducing the detrimental effects of overworking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25897435897 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79673544076 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55641025641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5557776135 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14837160442 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612695364741 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476623000037 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950143143415 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477489973744 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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