The diagrams show changes in a student common room
Information regarding how a student common room has transformed over the past five years is revealed in the diagram. Overall, this accommodation has experienced relatively extensive renovations and rearrangements, the most noticeable of which is the alteration of table sets and the addition of a TV.
To the left of the entrance, a row of domestic appliances has remained intact with the exception of a bench which has been replaced by an additional microwave. Moreover, a drinks machine has been installed adjacent to a refrigerator in the back left corner. Additionally, one of two seven-piece round table sets has been removed to allow an eight-seat rectangular table set to be arranged while the other has remained unchanged.
To the right of the entrance, at the front, one of two six-seat round table sets has remained the same while the other has been superseded by a four-seat non-backrest bench exclusively catering laptops. Additionally, in the back right corner, a flat TV in tandem with three encircling chairs has been furnished in the place where there formerly was a two-drawer vertical cabinet.
- Nowadays more and more people use online shopping Some people think it is a good development To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- More and more people want to buy clothes cars and other products from well known brands What are the reasons Do you think it is a positive or negative trend 24 02 2019 89
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in an European country between 1979 and 2004 73
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 78
- more and more people want to buy clothes cars and other products from well known brands What are the reasons Do you think it is a positive or negative trend 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...domestic appliances has remained intact with the exception of a bench which has been replaced by an a...
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Line 6, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the right of the entrance, at the front, one of two six-seat round table sets has...
^^
Line 6, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...while the other has been superseded by a four-seat non-backrest bench exclusively...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24444444444 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16666666667 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2437575888 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.857142857 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0686730333333 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043426152138 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106371914231 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647193730199 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091527015073 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.