Topic: Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
Advertising has become increasingly prominent in our daily life, leading to several consequences. From my perspective, this development should be undergone a rigid screen before the public officially on different social media platforms. This essay will shed light on more of detail positive effects behind this trend.
One major ground benefit behind the rising of this trend is that it will create more job opportunities for the youth. In fact, it cannot be denied that with the thriving significantly of the economy, young people are being put under enormous pressure to find well-paid jobs in a competitive market. However, if the marketing industry is developing, particularly the advertising field, it would bring a variety of job opportunities for the youth to achieve self-developed. Therefore, this approach might minimize the rate of unemployment, which will definitely stimulate the economy. In addition, this field requires a high sense of creativity and innovation, thus fostering the young generation to unleash their ideas to purchase their passions. According to a recent report, there are more than 500 advertisement ideas, which are generated by university students, that have been applied to the fintech industry.
Another advantage that would be taken into consideration is that this method is a great way to educate consumers. By that I mean, the government can encourage the producers to integrate tremendous current affairs into their advertisements. For instance, many health lifestyle choices, as well as nutrition knowledge, might be added to food and beverage commercials in order to enhance customers to lead a healthy lifestyle, such as the Vinamilk advertisement. This brand often launches a campaign related to nutritional supplements integrated with the suggestion from nutrition experts. Furthermore, this is considered an effective marketing way to reach the target audience, particularly the youth who have a tendency to purchase numerous products. Therefore, it would enhance domestic competition, also making a huge contribution to accelerating economic growth.
In conclusion, although excessive advertisements may cause several consequences, I still hold a belief this may facilitate human life in terms of advancing promising careers and a great means to educate people in any aspect of life. Therefore, the government should encourage this pace of development with strict restrictions so as to get rid of detrimental advertisements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...nto their advertisements. For instance, many health lifestyle choices, as well as nutrition...
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...of development with strict restrictions so as to get rid of detrimental advertisements. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65951742627 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27215063691 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630026809651 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.122994296 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.176470588 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131266408485 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412556718976 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579647032938 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926734063639 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747772539942 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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