The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes
The diagrams illustrate the actual procedure of making cement and concrete in which process has follow several stages.
Having a look on the production of cement, the first step involved limestone and clay both are gathered and material hand over to the crusher and sometimes after this material ready for the form of powder. The next stage is a mixer, with the help of mixer, material passed through the rotating heater because it perduce heat .After having the experience of mixing sand and then grand with grinder.The final step is, all material obtained in the form of cement and being packed in bags.
Moving to the concrete production, there are four components used in this process. First one is a water, it used only 10% while, the quantity of the cement is a less than half and other two ingredients, gravel used 50% but the uses of sand is half as compare to the formal. At last all material pour into the concrete mixer and it gives a straight position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... next stage is a mixer, with the help of mixer, material passed through the rota...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age is a mixer, with the help of mixer, material passed through the rotating hea...
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Line 2, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... rotating heater because it perduce heat .After having the experience of mixing sa...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...otating heater because it perduce heat .After having the experience of mixing sand an...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68823529412 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37373896589 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2758988568 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.833333333 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271689505762 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133746193296 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080760133455 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191438710441 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775666774924 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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