In this modern era, lots of technology are created such as cars and motorcycles. Car is one of the example of transportation that can make people's daily basis more convenient. However, there are some drawbacks too. This essay will discuss both of the arguments.
To begin, cars were created for lots of purposes. For an instance, cars can make a trip become faster. In addition, cars have their own engines and machines that can make them more powerful. For people, cars are needed to cover them from the rain. On the other side, motorcycles do not have roof to protect them from the water drops, while cars have. For families, it is easier to use cars since they have lots of seats. Other than that, it also have big spaces for someone who likes to shop in a big amount.
It is true that cars can make community's life become more effective. However, there are some negative sides of having a car. Global warming is one of the impacts that is given by cars. In general, cars produced dirty fog that come from their engine. That thing could make Earth's atmosphere thinner. Furthermore, owning a car means that people should pay taxes and charges for car services. As an example, in Indonesia, citizens should pay a big amount of taxes that cost 10% from the car's prices every month.
To conclude, people's life could be more efficient by having a car. Nonetheless, they should pay attention to the Earth's condition. In my opinion, I suggest that before buying a car, people have to reassure about their purpose of getting a car.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...lots of seats. Other than that, it also have big spaces for someone who likes to sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, while, in addition, in general, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66789667897 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39588273534 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.029355801 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.2380952381 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9047619048 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308536473658 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989868645988 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685426211471 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196556098628 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398473068406 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.2329268293 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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