Shopping stores or place nowadays are being replaced and the major cause is done by customers with online shopping. However, I think it is important to see both sides.
To begin with, stores are usually have more things than online stores. Buying things in stores do not make people wait for days. Furthermore, online shoppings majorly take one to two days for shipping. Sometimes, it is also delayed and people need the product as soon as possible. For instance, my mom needed to buy plastic bowl for a celebration so she decided to buy it online since she thought that it will come on time. However, the plastic bowl did not come based on the application. It arrived two days after the celebration. Since then, she decided to buy things from the market rather then online shops.
Another point is that, online shopping will make people spend their time to go to the real stores. They can enjoy their time to do something else. With just one click, things that people need will come at the door. Moreover, the payment is also easy without going out to the bank. Just with e-bank, the product will be paid. In addition, sometimes imported things are not available in stores. Meanwhile in online shops, they sell it with lower prices than stores.
In summary, online shops give both impacts to communities. I suggest that both shops need to be extended and improved to create consumer’s satisfaction. However, i prefer online shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...consumer's satisfaction. However, i prefer online shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83064516129 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44968886725 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7213432775 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.9 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232237224222 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709934620084 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819287400915 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164546190259 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434002731798 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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