The line graph illustrates the number of visitors to and from the UK over 20 years of period, while the bar graph indicates popular destinations by UK citizens in 1999. Overall, the diagram increase gradually, whereas the most well-known country by citizens is France.
To begin, UK's citizens who went abroad in 1979 stood at slightly above 10 millions. The line was moderately improved to 20 millions in 1984. The figure gradually rise until it reached a peak from 1984 to 1999 , with approximately 52 millions of residents. On the other hand, the number of tourists who came to visited the United Kingdom was started at 10 millions. Furthermore, five years later, the chart climb significantly, while the last 15 years, it was increase moderately.
The most popular country that the UK's residents went overseas in 1999 was France, with above 10 millions. Other than that, Spain was also the second well-known country that was visited by them. There was a slight difference on the number of UK visitors by around 2 millions. Meanwhile, Turkey, Greece, and USA were the least popular countries among the other. The trend was ended by the exceeded gap between UK's visitors and residents who went outside their own country, whereas France had the highest rates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ntil it reached a peak from 1984 to 1999 , with approximately 52 millions of resid...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '52 million'.
Suggestion: 52 million
... from 1984 to 1999 , with approximately 52 millions of residents. On the other hand, the numbe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, so, well, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99526066351 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64135781236 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578199052133 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2740878974 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244174285513 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875451985379 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850769431493 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183466846214 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765537829893 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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