Ex 2 The bar chart shows the percentage of small medium large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016

The given diagram presents data on the percentage of small, medium and large companies using social media for business purposes from 2012 to 2016. Overall, large businesses make use of social media the most among all types of companies.

In 2012, large companies made extensive use of social media and started by 80 percent. This number had stayed steady for three years straight until it plummeted in 2015. The number of large businesses having social media presence declined to 50 percent, one and a half times less than that of 2014. However, it soon underwent a dramatic increase in the year 2016, where the percentage of large companies using social media was back to the original number, 80%.

The number of small businesses and medium businesses making use of social media started low at 28 and 31 percent respectively. These numbers continued to grow and by the year 2014, small companies reached 35% of social media presence. The glow was more pronounced on medium businesses as they reached nearly 50% of social network presence in the year 2014. The year 2015 witnessed a fall in social media use with both businesses until they grew again the year after. At the end of the period, there were nearly 50% of both businesses using social platforms, double that of 2015.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90366972477 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40659619456 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5968200687 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.1818181818 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418046084459 0.215688989381 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193132980674 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129808973491 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344394174409 0.15604864568 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11277941044 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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