Fast food is a part of life in many places. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.
Some people hold the opinion that fast food has many adverse impacts on daily lives and diet while fast food has become more essential for many places. My inclination supports the statement that excessive use of fast food has many pitfalls that eventually can be the cause of many diseases.
Nowadays, it can be seen that people has become more and more addicted of eating fast food as compare to last couple decades. One of the obvious disadvantage of eating fast food is to be getting much obesity swiftly that actually can be a reason of laziness or many illness. Furthermore, survey depicts that in between 20 to 35 years age of people prefer to eat food outside instead of home whether it is fast food or some other nourishment. Furthermore, those people who has outdoor jobs or work as a sales representatives they usually need to eat food outside of the home due to more traveling as well as fluctuation of time.
On the other hand, mostly people do not have any option to eat food at home who are living alone or working in other countries without families. And, It is very moot point that parents need to make their children habitual to eat food at home from starting that eventually will be worthwhile for health. At Last, people need to understand that eating food outside is wasting of time and money which actually ruins people's health and habits.
To sum up, it is very essential for people to understand the pros and cons of eating fast food everyday as well as avoid eating fast food as much as it can be. In this matter, parent plays most imperative role among the children to move their tendency into good habits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun illness seems to be countable; consider using: 'many illnesses'.
Suggestion: many illnesses
...actually can be a reason of laziness or many illness. Furthermore, survey depicts that in be...
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Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is fast food or some other nourishment. Furthermore, those people who has outdoor jobs or w...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'representative'?
Suggestion: representative
...who has outdoor jobs or work as a sales representatives they usually need to eat food outside o...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d the pros and cons of eating fast food everyday as well as avoid eating fast food as mu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, if, so, well, while, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 292.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62671232877 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42361975701 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517123287671 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.5515846624 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.818181818 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220112422229 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100248934094 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067800934137 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15525118742 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678103272391 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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