Felixstone had not a big changes between 1967 and 2001 Many flats replaced the shops

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Felixstone had not a big changes between 1967 and 2001. Many flats replaced the shops.

Felixstone had not a big changes between 1967 and 2001. Many flats replaced the shops. Farmland turned into hotel, swimming pool and tennis court. Car park was built near the dunes. Public beach was put down the place of marina. Fish market changed to the private beach.
In 1967, golf course situated on the northwest side of destination. High street was the centre of Felixstone. The shops were to the west and east of street. The farmland extend in the east of location. Dunes and trees were south of golf store. Hotel was to the east of dunes. Cafe was located next to the hotel. Marina and pier were southwest of fish market. Moreover, the fish market is to the south side of farmland.
In 2001, apartments were opposite of shops. The swimming pool, hotel and tennis court were east of flats. Wind turbines were built in the south of dunes. The car park added to the southwest side of hotel. Public beach was south of café. As well as private beach was to the east of cafe and public beach.

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...uilt in the south of dunes. The car park added to the southwest side of hotel. Pu...
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...blic beach was south of café. As well as private beach was to the east of cafe an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, as to, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51933701657 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0987349765 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497237569061 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 8.0 22.4926829268 36% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 11.0781597561 43.030603864 26% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 38.9523809524 112.824112599 35% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.61904761905 22.9334400587 38% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.7619047619 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.09268292683 464% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1660561012 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608339905127 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155568887014 0.0843802449381 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143245120845 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163244356575 0.0819641961636 199% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 13.2329268293 32% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.74 61.2550243902 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.9 10.3012195122 28% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.86 11.4140731707 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 11.4329268293 26% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.9970731707 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 3.0 11.0658536585 27% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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