The first char below shoe how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart show the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The two pie charts illustrates the how kind of energy used in two different processes in Australia.
Overall, the charts provide information about the two different uses of energy. Fist in household and second in greenhouse gas emissions both are divided in six stages.
First of all, the uses of energy in purpose of heating process is almost near the half in household. In greenhouse gas emissions, it is lower then half of the household(15%). Second, major use of energy is water heating 30%. In the gas emissions it has 2% mor the household energy. However, refrigeration use for greenhouse gas is 14%, it is almost double then households.
Whereas, the second main use in greenhouse is other appliance 28%. When in other chart it use only 15%. Whatever, the cooling process is lowest use in both energy 2% and 3% respectively. And lighting is use in gans emissions is 8%, it is half use in household energy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eating 30 In the gas emissions it has 2 mor the household energy However refrigera...
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...her appliance 28 When in other chart it use only 15 Whatever the cooling process i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, then, whereas, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63291139241 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74090826415 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46835443038 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 158.0 22.4926829268 702% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 732.0 112.824112599 649% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 158.0 22.9334400587 689% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 64.0 5.23603664747 1222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468819361542 0.215688989381 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.468819361542 0.103423049105 453% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298283365367 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704068073377 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 79.4 13.2329268293 600% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -80.43 61.2550243902 -131% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 63.7 10.3012195122 618% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.76 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.37 8.06136585366 178% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 65.2 10.9970731707 593% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 11.0658536585 488% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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