The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The given diagrams depict information regarding household energy use and its greenhouse emissions in an average Australian family.
Overall, it is apparent that heating is the most significant contributor to energy consumption while the opposite can be obviously witnessed in cooling. However, water heating is the leading culprit that emits the most significant amount of greenhouse gas.
Concerning domestic energy consumption, Australian families have the highest demand for heating, which occupies approximately three-seventh, recording 42%. Following that, the proportion of water heating appliances is exactly 30%, which is precisely twofold other appliances. Additionally, refrigeration consumes only 7%, which is one-sixth that of heating appliances. The figures for cooling and lighting are of the two minimal data, respectively accounting for 2%, and 4%.
In respect to greenhouse gas released in Australian households, water heating produces emissions the most substantially, registering 32%, while cooling has the most negligible figure which records 3%. Other appliances contribute to 28%, which is basically two times higher than that of refrigeration. Meanwhile, heating appliances are 15%, followed by refrigeration and lighting respectively with 14% and 8%.
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in an European country betwwwn 1999 to 2004 78
- The diagrams show changes in a student common room 78
- Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today 67
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in an European country betwwwn 1999 to 2004 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18888888889 4.92477711251 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25337431668 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0524570041 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18003080073 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702351956954 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866337197456 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133818048957 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101996683553 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.33 11.4140731707 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.06136585366 132% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.