The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.
The first given pie chart describes the energy consumption in Australian household and second pie chart shows illustrate the greenhouse gas emission by Australian household.
Overall, heating is the main way of using energy in Australia, while water heating operation emit the maximum amount of greenhouse gas. In addition cooling has the minimum share of energy applying in Australian household and also produce the latest amount of greenhouse gas.
After heating by 42% of energy consumption, water heating operation utilize 30% energy in Australian household, while water heating make greenhouse gas about two times as much as heating which is 15%. Cooling has the smallest share of energy consumption by 2%, and this operation cause 3% of produced greenhouse gas.
Lighting, refrigeration and other application use 26% of energy in Australian household (4%, 7% and 15% respectively). In other word just one fourth of Australian household energy use belong to them, nevertheless more than 50% of greenhouse gas emission which is produced by Australian household is because of this operations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...he maximum amount of greenhouse gas. In addition cooling has the minimum share of energy...
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Line 8, column 310, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d by Australian household is because of this operations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, nevertheless, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95589844889 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5826144202 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.571428571 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44172137169 0.215688989381 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222288794761 0.103423049105 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1007569935 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29079367493 0.15604864568 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991569036592 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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