The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information below by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts illustrate information about consumption of energy in houses in Australia. The first one shows the used household energy, while second one is demonstrates the emissions of greenhouse gas. Overall, it can be clearly seen that heating and water heating were the most useful for energy production in both given graphs.
In first chart, most people used heating energy, which is the most useful for Households, additionally, it occupied more than half of the graph in percents (42%). However, the least used by energy was cooling, the percentage was only 2%, it was in two times less than water heating (30%). Also, it means that Australian people almost do not use this type of energy. Following this, the fourth way of energy is refrigeration (7%), which was 3 percent less than lighting (4%) consumption.
The second pie chart gives information about greenhouse gas emissions in Australia, which had the same types of used energy in the first graph. First of all, the most utilized energy type was water heating (32%), though, the least used was cooling, which had the smallest and percentage as at first (3%). Furthemore, water heating was used in the similar amount of energy as at household energy (32%). Refrigeration (14%) used in 1% less than heating (15%), moreover, lighting energy was utilized in 3.5 times less than other appliances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...In first chart, most people used heating energy, which is the most useful for Hou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, second, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63105855803 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5999096073 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.272727273 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313352791812 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147508806297 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076878327617 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241990321391 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421143131603 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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