the flow chart below show the procedure to get a driving license in the US

Essay topics:

the flow chart below show the procedure to get a driving license in the US

Given is a flowchart illustrating the process to obtain a driving license in the States. Overall, it is apparent that the shortest way to get a license consists of seven steps with passing the eyesight test as the basic requirement for all candidates.

As can be seen, drivers first need to go to the driving license center in order to fill in the required forms. applicants then have to take the eyesight test, only those who clear this can proceed to the next steps after paying some required fees.

Subsequently, applicants sit the written exam and are allowed to have two retakes, before repaying the fee. those who successfully pass this test, either on their first, second or third attempt, are eligible to proceed to the road exam. Successful candidates will be granted the license while those who fail will have to go back to the fee-paying step.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Applicants
...in order to fill in the required forms. applicants then have to take the eyesight test, on...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Those
...e two retakes, before repaying the fee. those who successfully pass this test, either...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, then, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90540540541 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55840291844 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.0287381873 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0983617065697 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516143693939 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515159743848 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763584045906 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524792670272 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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