The given picture illustrates the life of a honey bee.

Essay topics:

The given picture illustrates the life of a honey bee.

Given is a diagram illustrating different stages in the life cycle of a honey bee. Overall, it is noticeable that the bee’s metamorphosis takes 34 to 36 days to complete its six stages, beginning with egg.

As can be seen, the initial phase is the female bees lay one or two eggs every three days. Between 9 to 10 days later, each egg hatches from which a nymph comes to being. Subsequently, this initiative form of the bee molts 3 times as it develops, lasting for 5, 7 and 9 days respectively. it is apparent that the nymph grows in size each time its skin is shed. A young adult emerges from its final molting after 31 days from the start of the cycle. it is shown in the next 4 days that the bee finally reaches its full maturity, when it is ready to reproduce and the life cycle begins again.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...sting for 5, 7 and 9 days respectively. it is apparent that the nymph grows in siz...
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Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...er 31 days from the start of the cycle. it is shown in the next 4 days that the be...
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Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e bee finally reaches its full maturity, when it is ready to reproduce and the li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50577587633 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1191702801 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.125 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20834332879 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102610274638 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164958456171 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210498199005 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126179014975 0.0819641961636 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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