The flow chart below shows the procedure to get a driving license in the US Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The flow chart below shows the procedure to get a driving license in the US. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture depicts the process of obtaining a driving license in the US.
Basically, there are two steps before taking an eyesight test. if the participants pass this step, they will have to pay fees and then have the written exam. Conversely, no license is allowed to be brought to them if they fail.
Firstly, the candidates have to go to the driving license center and fill in the forms before attending an eyesight exam. if they pass this stage, the participants have to pay fees and have the written test. As soon as the candidates complete the writing test, they will do the road exam. The applicants will get the driving license if they succeed in this test or will have to pay fees anh retake the written test until they succeed.
On the contrary, if the participants fail the written exam, there are two more times for them to retake this test until they accomplish. In addition, the candidates will attend the road examination if they complete or will have to pay fees if they fail at the final turn of the written test.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...o steps before taking an eyesight test. if the participants pass this step, they w...
^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...orms before attending an eyesight exam. if they pass this stage, the participants ...
^^
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (anh) must be used with a third-person verb: 'retakes'.
Suggestion: retakes
... this test or will have to pay fees anh retake the written test until they succeed. O...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, if, so, then, in addition, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58602150538 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39881966003 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440860215054 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3061913571 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0532711801617 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331402263123 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488273047975 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579307070499 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594379301124 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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