The following graph and pie chart shows the sales of a company in the first and second qua of the year.
The given horizotal bar graph and circular chart reveals the information about the sales of a company in particular year in first and second quarter. The information is given in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that thae sales of toys in second quarter is rise up by 6 times compares to first quarter whereas, the sales of electronic gadgets id fall by 3 times.
It can be seen that, in first quarter yhe sales of toys and computer is less as compared to other products inls only 5% and 10%. Moreover, the sales of clothes and food is in the same proportion is 25% more that any other products. In the first quarter, the sales of other and electrical gadgets is 20% and 15% respectively.
Apart from that, in the pie chart the sales of second quarter is shown. Firstly, the sales of computer is same as in the first quarter is one ten. Furthermore, the sales of electronic gadgets, food and clothes is reduce from the sale of quarter. The sale of the other products and toys in second quarter is 25% and 30% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The given horizotal bar graph and circular c...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gadgets'' or 'gadget's'?
Suggestion: gadgets'; gadget's
...uarter whereas, the sales of electronic gadgets id fall by 3 times. It can be seen t...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... yhe sales of toys and computer is less as compared to other products inls only 5%...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...products inls only 5% and 10%. Moreover, the sales of clothes and food is in the ...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...electronic gadgets, food and clothes is reduce from the sale of quarter. The sale of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, whereas, apart from, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.609375 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60566102957 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463541666667 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2522867406 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289082014868 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133542699481 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990623978104 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189352621848 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611474588892 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.