The following maps show the changes that have taken place in the centre of a town since 1700.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In the map we can see some changes in the town centre since 1700.
The greatest changes that have been made are on the streets. Now there is a new big road, The Steggle Road, that divides the centre from the river, replacing the old Steggle Farm. On the right of the map we can see that the Market Street has been improved too with a zebra crossing. On the High Street now there is a set of traffic light at the junction with the Steggle Road, and a roundabout at the crossing with the Market Street.
On the top, the Goode Farm has been replaced by a car park and some houses, while the Market Square and the church haven't been changed. Only the Hotel has been expanded. In the Stables area now there is a block of flats and below them, crossing the St. Peter's Lane, a supermarket has been built.
Overall the number of the houses and shops has grown.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the crossing with the Market Street. On the top, the Goode Farm has been replac...
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Discourse Markers used:
['so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287234042553 0.268076937826 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.159574468085 0.116061578633 137% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0212765957447 0.0759168565197 28% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0265957446809 0.0366838410393 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0159574468085 0.0131127313244 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117021276596 0.155750635184 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0851063829787 0.0379272487307 224% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.17268013614 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.18085106383 0.0948980150116 191% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106382978723 0.00437022459523 243% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106382978723 0.00967000014798 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 870.0 1161.00487805 75% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.9 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33742331288 5.90752243213 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.245398773006 0.337110787985 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.159509202454 0.247514529752 64% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0920245398773 0.171178102325 54% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0429447852761 0.112407865282 38% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.17268013614 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527607361963 0.546246751206 97% => OK
Word variations: 43.0756300195 49.3433353143 87% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1111111111 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4798379931 42.9750493124 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 0.689975730869 32% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 34.0620313565 47.7609492067 71% => OK
Elegance: 2.42105263158 2.94281807926 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.541844276624 0.418131533498 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.188339895515 0.181151798455 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0815175814592 0.0850326197045 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.771643313128 0.706616315825 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152235269254 0.157042692854 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.316767523586 0.228904883108 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676365940445 0.108899403657 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.421861906047 0.367819155151 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0805636277726 0.0812612215331 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397684336691 0.316326947829 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415095074359 0.0921553760075 45% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 7.1512195122 42% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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