All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise invobesity? How could it be tackled?
As the number of people who are overweight increases from day to day in the majority of countries in the world, it is essential that we consider the reasons for the growth in obesity among both youngsters and grown-ups. This naturally leads us to question of how should societies treat the people who faced the problem of fatness. In this essay, I will explore the reasons for the situation in question, and try to find out the methods that can be applied to reduce corpulence among the people.
To begin with, obesity may be viewed as a consequence of a better quality of life. Nowadays, workers earn more money and can afford eating food in the desirable amounts. This is not a problem as long as they are physically active. For instance, the US soldiers are keen eaters but their work requires a lot of energy thus reducing the risk of becoming burly. Therefore, the first step to avoid portliness is to do as much physical activity as you can, or simply walk about five kilometres a day.
Another common reason of why people get stout is the quality of food they consume. It is obvious that humans prefer nutrient products, which often contain insane amounts of fat. I believe that most of us have to change the diet by including more fruits and vegetables into it and replacing meat by fish, which is more contributing to our health.
Many scientists believe that stress can also cause the wish of devouring more products, especially bakery and sweets. This mainly concerns women rather than men. To avoid this, those who are exposed to stress must find other ways of coping with it. They can relax their nerves by going in for sports, such as swimming and running.
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- All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise invobesity? How could it be tackled? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to eat'.
Suggestion: to eat
... workers earn more money and can afford eating food in the desirable amounts. This is ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for instance', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227692307692 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.166153846154 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0676923076923 0.0946595960268 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0492307692308 0.0501214627716 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0492307692308 0.0437548338989 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138461538462 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0369230769231 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40106768075 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338461538462 0.0326793684256 104% => OK
Particles: 0.00307692307692 0.00163938923432 188% => OK
Determiners: 0.0953846153846 0.0861772015684 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0276923076923 0.021408717616 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0246153846154 0.011925033212 206% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1676.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 297.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6430976431 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329966329966 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225589225589 0.28420135186 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144781144781 0.203846283523 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0909090909091 0.137316102897 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40106768075 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.037074148 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 69.7546653817 60.7387585426 115% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5409175179 49.517814964 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.733333333 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 42.3589225589 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.52325581395 1.69124875643 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26913016743 0.332605444948 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0756831090002 0.102741220458 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0782080679782 0.0668466124924 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51175447596 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155504102222 0.148594505496 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101674743742 0.134430193775 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674964888361 0.0742795772207 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291560868419 0.324371583561 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0748727669833 0.0638462369009 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175631979395 0.228012699653 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842037705208 0.058150111329 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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