The grape compares the numbers of visits to two new music sites on the Web
The data given in the line graph display the public interest in the most recent launched websites in the internet,namely, Music Choice and Pop Parade in 15 days.
To put in a nutshell, there is a oscillating tendency in the figure of visits to these websites during the period in the question.
On the first day, the Pop Parade begins with 120 000, which is more than three times as the statistic of Music choice with only 40 000. What is worth noting that on the first 7 days, the number of Pop Parade fell swiftly by around 90 000 from 120 000 to a trough of 30 000. Moreover, the amount of visits to the Music Choice escalates insignificantly by nearly 10 000 to the highest point of 120 0000 from 110 000 from day 13 to day 14.
On the last day of period surveyed, the Pop Parade still ranks first with about 170 000 while at the same time the Music Choice falls remarkably by 40 000 from 120 000 to approximately 80 0000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , namely
...recent launched websites in the internet,namely, Music Choice and Pop Parade in 15 days...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...days. To put in a nutshell, there is a oscillating tendency in the figure of v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28813559322 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41745860353 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.8097837373 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.5 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0734451799464 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438558167763 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0133943201178 0.0843802449381 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470524452224 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132959757453 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.88 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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