Some people say tourism brings about positive effects on the countries where tourists travel while others argue it does have disadvantages. What may be the advantages and disadvantages of tourism?
In today’s modern world, tourism has prevailed in many nations. Some people are convinced that we can benefit a lot from this industry; in the meantime, others argue that are too many drawbacks of it. Personally, I am of the opinion that there are both advantages and disadvantages of tourism.
To begin with, it is a fact beyond dispute that tourist industry provides a profusion of benefits. First of all, tourism can supply local people with many kinds of jobs. That is to say, in those holiday destinations, people might build many hotels, restaurants, supermarkets and so on, which will give people many potential chances to have a job. Secondly, tourism has a great contribution to the national economy. In other words, we could benefit from the expenditures on transport, food and taxes from visitors.
Howbeit, notwithstanding the aforementioned merits, there would also be the presence of accompanying drawbacks. First and foremost, the environment may deteriorate in a wide range of ways. For instance, tourists can litter every place they put their foot on, which will worsen the status of the surroundings and landscape. Secondly, this tourist industry can make the life of local people more and more complicated and messier. To illustrate, people from the novel area might arrive in and make these holiday destinations more crowded and nosier, which will has an atrocious influence on the life of people in these regions.
To conclude then, it is an undeniable fact that although there exist positive impacts on tourism, its adverse effects should never be overlooked. Indeed, it is of great importance for one to be able to benefit from it and evade its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, first of all, in other words, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13405797101 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91220290346 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7526452348 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223736286916 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698552218145 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04471345365 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133578703363 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441472082936 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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