The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
The data given in the line graph display the amount of visitors to the recently launched music sites on the internet, according to thousands.
Overall, there is a fluctuating trend in the number of Pop Parade; in the meantime, Music choice follows an ascending tendency. During the period, Pop Parade is more common to the netizen than Music Choice.
To begin with, regards to the number of Pop Parade, it begins at 120 which is more than three times as the figure for Music Choice (40). On the day 7, there is a remarkable fall of 90 000 to the trough of 30 while the figure for Music Choice falls slightly by about 20 to 20.
On the remaining days, the number of visits to Music Choice escalates by 100 from 20 to the crest of 120 on the day 14. The period day 7 - day 15 witnesses a dramatic increment of 14 from 30 to 170.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36942675159 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31877175494 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2125657042 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169629542831 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794777813146 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511906617655 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103115758487 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273503537785 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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