Those people who have vegetarian food think that avoiding meat will make the people healthy. In my opinion, eating vegetable alone will not make people healthier. Having meat daily in our meals will make people to follow a good healthier life. Even though vegetables provide more vitamins, having meat will enrich protein which will make you body balance accurate. For instance, people who are vegetarians will have more muscle problems than meat eaters. it is Because vitamin enrich food will not be effective for strengthening muscles in human body. Firstly, a healthier life can only be conquer though healthy diet. vegetables alone cannot give a good healthy life. most of the vegetables contains only vitamins, finding and getting protein rich vegetable is difficult and expensive. Having vitamin rich food will helps to increase brain development, for high visual ability of eyes, for proper blood circulation in human body. Secondly, having meat with meals will help to maintains strong muscles and it help human to get rid of muscle problems. Meat eaters are consider to be healthy and strong because the protein enrich food shows higher efficacy for developing stronger muscles in them. To conclude, vegetable food alone will not lead to a healthy diet. for a healthy diet meat is also an important aspect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... balance accurate. For instance, people who are vegetarians will have more muscle probl...
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Line 1, column 456, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... more muscle problems than meat eaters. it is Because vitamin enrich food will not...
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Line 1, column 620, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Vegetables
...an only be conquer though healthy diet. vegetables alone cannot give a good healthy life. ...
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Line 1, column 670, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
... alone cannot give a good healthy life. most of the vegetables contains only vitamin...
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Line 1, column 818, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...xpensive. Having vitamin rich food will helps to increase brain development, for high...
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Line 1, column 978, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'maintain'.
Suggestion: maintain
...ly, having meat with meals will help to maintains strong muscles and it help human to get...
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Line 1, column 1010, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...help to maintains strong muscles and it help human to get rid of muscle problems. Me...
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Line 1, column 1068, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...rid of muscle problems. Meat eaters are consider to be healthy and strong because the pr...
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Line 1, column 1264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... alone will not lead to a healthy diet. for a healthy diet meat is also an importan...
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Line 1, column 1268, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'healthy diet meat'.
Suggestion: healthy diet meat
...ne will not lead to a healthy diet. for a healthy diet meat is also an important aspect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15887850467 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43918072011 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53738317757 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3879675436 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8571428571 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156276501751 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688586202416 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361167990236 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156276501751 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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