The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Given are the line graph contrasting the middling temperatures measured by months as well as the table comparing the figure of annual hours of sunshine in three distinct big cities namely London, New york and Sydney.
Perceptibly, the temperatures in London and New York are lowest in the first and last months of the year and highest in July while the opposite is true for Sydney.
The temperatures remain unchanged at 26 degrees Celsius in January and February in Syned, thereafter there is a significant diminution of temperatues at 26 to 16 degrees Celsius commencing March to the middle July. However, From the middle of July to the last month of the year witnessed an exponential leap at the temperatures from 16 to 25 degrees Celsius.
When it comes to the temperature in London and New york, in the first of 3 months of the year, It is lower than Sydney with the average quantity 8 degrees Celsius and 4 degrees Celsius respectively, These data swell exponentially from April to achieve their peak in july with 30 and 23 degrees Celsius respectively, Finally, these figures are a sharp slump with London at 9 degrees Celsius and New york at 5 degrees Celsius in the end of year.
Regarding the table chart, the total number of hours of sunshine in New york is highest with 2.535, followed by 2,473 times of sunshine in Syned, However, only 1,180 of the annual hours of sunshine for London.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nificant diminution of temperatues at 26 to 16 degrees Celsius commencing March t...
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...imes of sunshine in Syned, However, only 1,180 of the annual hours of sunshine fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, regarding, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74590163934 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71450115635 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487704918033 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2852990024 43.030603864 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.0 112.824112599 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.6666666667 22.9334400587 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204561822136 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115995979496 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717892653737 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129709363158 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682188630731 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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