The graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The data provides information on average temperature and annual hours of sunshine in london, New York and Sydney.
The temperature patterns for london and New York are similar, although New York has warmer summers and colder winters. In both cities, peaks occur in july/august, at 23° in london and 29° in New York. In contrast, Sydney's hottest weather is in December/January when temperature average 25°. During this period, New York temperatures dip to an average of around 5° , compared with 8° in London. On the other hand, Sydney lowest average temperatures in july are just over15°.
As far as hours of sunshine are concerned, New York and Sydney have similar averages of 2535 and 2473 hours respectively. London, however, has a much lower average of 1180hours.
Clearly, London is the coldest city and has the fewest hours of sunshine. New York has the hottest summers, but Sydney enjoys the warmest overall climate.
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- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport . 56
- The older generation tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generation for modern life.To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisation. Discuss the both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Sydneys the hottest'.
Suggestion: Sydneys the hottest
...ondon and 29° in New York. In contrast, Sydneys hottest weather is in December/January when tem...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...peratures dip to an average of around 5° , compared with 8° in London. On the othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17105263158 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79176027146 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.5039020677 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.6 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158985099732 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807698130236 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577819681047 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124546660896 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655692865378 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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