The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the USA and China in terms of the number of yearly births from 1920 to 2000
Generally, the data reveals distinct patterns in both countries' birth rates over the course of 80 years. However, from 1960 onward, the birth rates in both countries followed a downward trend, which the USA's was higher in the end
In detail, both China and the USA had similar birth rates, standing at 10 in 1920. By 1940, the figure for China significantly decreased by half, at 5, while the USA witnessed a modest increase to about 12. SubsequenTly, during the period from 1940 to 1945, the USA birth rate fell to under 5, whereas the China's remained unchanged at 5 until 1945.
The USA, on the other hand, witnessed a recovery in its birth rate to exactly 25 after 5 years but China drastically jumped to 20, surpassing the USA. Conversely, from 1960 onward, the USA birth rate gradually declined to around 6 in 2000, which was the same trajectory as China but to a greater extent, reaching merely 3.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44971653689 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605555555556 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.7262597158 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260311260065 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140754493013 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532133069136 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183350926604 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687924429145 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.