The graph below fives the information about the common activities children of different ages in the United States do as part of their bedtime routines.
The given graph show the general activities which American children prefer to do before their bedtime.
Regarding to the age group from 1-3 year, it was evident that reading and having a bath rank the top and the second of their all-time favorite bedtime action, due to over 60% and 40% of them are interested in those, respectively. By contrast, just 30% babies’ under 3 years of age have the habit to brush teeth before sleeping and half of the adjacently previous figure desire to watch TV or eat; but noticeably, children throughout this age period being keen on showering and eating still occupy the biggest rate.
In terms of elder kids, we can obviously see that this age group show the opposite trend comparing to children aging 1 to 3 years old, namely they indicate the greater interest (up to 70% for aged 4-6 and nearly 60% for 6-8, respectively) in reading before bed and they seem to regard brushing teeth as necessary, since the amount of children during 4-8 years doing this activity is roughly two third as much as that of younger counterparts. With having a bath and eating, the figure of elder children willing to do those activity constantly constitute the lowest and second lowest due to just approximately 33% kids want to take a shower and about 8% kids wanna eat. And normally, although just roughly 19% elder children like to watch TV as part of their bedtime routine, but this number is higher than that of babies, lead to babies’ lowest rate in this activity (15%).
Overall, the majority American kids below 8 years old feel like reading before going to bed, meanwhile watching TV and eating are those actions which are consider to have an opposite drift.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...habit to brush teeth before sleeping and half of the adjacently previous figure d...
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Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'those activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; those activities
... figure of elder children willing to do those activity constantly constitute the lowest and se...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
... and eating are those actions which are consider to have an opposite drift.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, second, still, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 294.0 196.424390244 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76530612245 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43106876304 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 106.607317073 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4316401628 43.030603864 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.142857143 112.824112599 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 22.9334400587 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201632750416 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101600892893 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053078949291 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127072312179 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717884079785 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.2329268293 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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