The charts below show the reasons why people want to leave the UK and work in other countries and why some people want to stay at the UK.
The given pie charts illustrate the reasons for people’s leaving and staying in the United Kingdom. Overall, it is evident that people in the uk have the inclination to leave and stay for some same factors: joining the families and friends, jobs and budget.
Regarding to the causes for coming away the uk, the percentage of staying with families and friends is 39%, which is the highest numbers comparing with other 4 reasons, exactly doubling that of employment. Otherwise, the second highest is 24%, represented by the bad weather. Taxation and financial reasons together constitute the relatively similar proportion with 9% and 10%, respectively, which is approximately one fourth as much as the reasons relating families and friends.
In terms of reasons for staying in the uk, there are also 5 reasons for this decision, but the bad weather and taxation are replaced by health system and language. Living with families and friends continue being the most dominant trend, accounting for 34%, closely followed by employment with 28%. In contrast, the financial reasons make up the lowest percentage of 9%, 1% lower than that of health system. while, language barriers occupy the third reason of 19%.
In conclusion, families and friends always the main reason which lead to the one’s staying or leaving, while the financial reasons take the nearby lowest numbers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, second, so, third, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22072072072 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63793644895 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.244289009 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18950259822 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807282051071 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730670883434 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12820171295 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841996054183 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.