Some people believe that modern technologies useful for workers but at the same time others suggest that they complicate everything. As well as offering my personal opinion, this essay will disscuss both of these views and show how effective but dangerous simmultaneosly devices and apparatuses could be in every-day human's life.
More and more shops prefer to use self-checkout machines instead of hire full stuff of cashiers. On the one hand it is extremely useful development which helps to avoid long ques in supermarkets. It, obviuosly, saves significant amount of time for customers as well as company's money which could be spend on sallaries. On the other hand, if one day a managment decided to use only robots, it would be a huge problem for workers who will lose their job opportunities. In addition, even today it is difficult to find a job, thus this would damage labour market a lot and might lead to unemployment level increase.
Computers, smartphones and laptops are important part of every proficiency, they simplify range of processes. In other words, individuals nowadays can work from their own homes, this lets spend time more wisely which was priveosly wasted for commuting. As a counterfact, it is important to mention healthcare conditions. Being focused on their endless work people forget to keep a diet as well as do exersices. In addition, they keep their personal information on-line that may be dangerous beacause of cyber-criminals.
Ultimately, new technologies make our live more convenient but it still have some issues which needs to solve. In my personal opinion, even though there are some drawbacks in new technologies using, I would say that all the advantages much more beneficial. I have been using a computer and a phone for a different purposes since I started working and will keep use them.
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- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 89
- The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut arts and music out of that curriculum so that children can focus on the useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...cate everything. As well as offering my personal opinion, this essay will disscuss both of these...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...e our live more convenient but it still have some issues which needs to solve. In my...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...some issues which needs to solve. In my personal opinion, even though there are some drawbacks i...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'purpose'?
Suggestion: purpose
... a computer and a phone for a different purposes since I started working and will keep u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, thus, well, in addition, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11589403974 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96867739582 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0670362135 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121212797645 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394684940052 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605005786763 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087289243785 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753142842031 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.