The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of people living in urban areas in Phillipines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Overall, the figure for urban residents in four Asian countries increased from 1970 and 2020 and is expected to continue growing in 2030 and 2040. Although the number of citizens in Malaysia left behind Phillipines in 1970 and 1990, almost all the time the proportion of the population who living in cities in Malaysia achieved the highest.
On one hand, the figure for urban population in Malaysia and Indonesia have witnessed the continuous increasing trend over the period in question. Both of these countries experienced a significant rise from 1970 and 1990, by about 15% to 45% in 1990 and by 10% to just below 25% in 1990, respectively. After that, the percentage of Malaysia increased sharply before reaching a peak of approximately 85% in 2040, overtaking Phillipine to become the highest. Similarly, the figure for Indonesia also reached a peak of nearly 60% in 2040, overtaking Phillipines and Thailand to become the second highest, just behind Malaysia.
On the other hand, the percentage of urban population in Phillipines and Thailand experienced a slightly increase between 1970 and 2040. In 1990, both two countries increased significantly, with 20% rise to 50% in Phillipines, and 10% rise to nearly 30% in Thailand. Between 1990 and 2020, while Phillipines slightly fluctuated from 50% to just above 40%, the figure for Thailand remained the same. In 2040, the two countries are expected a slight increase, Phillipines reaches its old peak of 50% and Thailand continuely increased by about 10% to 40%.
- The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature
- The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature
- The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparis 61
- The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature 61
- The most important aim of science should be to improve people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...in Phillipines and Thailand experienced a slightly increase between 1970 and 2040. In 1990, both tw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, similarly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20652173913 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.914023467 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45652173913 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.1988291654 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224329136825 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101293066493 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699387150283 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171893538071 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058113380675 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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