The line graph illustrates the proportion of how much people living in cities in four different Asian countries from 1730 to 2020 and the prediction for 2030 and 2040
Overall, The data of every countries will have increased with the later time, the lower climbed speed. Moreover, Malaysia have the highest percentage of people living in the cities most of the time.
In 1970, Indonesia is the countries had the lowest number of cities residents divided to total population, which stood at approximately 15% while that figures for Malaysia is one time higher. In 50 years period later both countries have witnessed a huge jumped, the percentages of Malaysians cities individuals have raised to 80% while that of the Indonesia have been to 50%.
In 1990 there is a tiny moment that the percentages of Philippines was in the peak that higher than every other countries, which stood at 50% . Then they dropped to the 40% bottom peak, which data is the same as Indonesia. Thailand will have been the countries had lowest proportions of urban people since 2000, which was 30% in 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...graph illustrates the proportion of how much people living in cities in four differe...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Malaysia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...lower climbed speed. Moreover, Malaysia have the highest percentage of people living...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t of the Indonesia have been to 50%. In 1990 there is a tiny moment that the pe...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...very other countries, which stood at 50% . Then they dropped to the 40% bottom pea...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
.... Thailand will have been the countries had lowest proportions of urban people since 2000,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56916593208 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5156306985 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180091659021 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800598345976 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878978573217 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135958410874 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115470479646 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.