The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure compares Asia, the UK, and other nations in the world regarding the people living in Australia born from those given countries from 1976 to 2011
Overall, the number of people born in Asia and other nations living in Australia witnessed an upward trend, with the former seeing the fastest growth while the figure for British people witnessed an opposite trend.
In 1976, the number of Asian people living in Australia stood at just above 2.5% while the percentage of the Australians born in the UK and others were 14% and 11% respectively. Over the next 25 years, the number of people delivered in Asia and others living in Australia rose to 8% and 12% in 2001 while the figure for Britain dropped to 7%. As a consequence, the total number of offshore people living in Australia dropped slightly to 21% in 2001.
In the latter period, the proportion of Australian people born in the UK went down to 5%, whereas opposite patterns are evident in the figures for Australian people of Asian and European descent, with the former rising to 12% and the latter to its high of 15%. The total demographics saw a steep growth to its peak of 25%.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-08-03 | nghiemngoc2912 | 84 | view |
- The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia the UK and other regions Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 2002 84
- Do the advantages of private means of transportation such as cars and motorbikes outweigh the disadvantages compared to public transport trains buses and taxis 73
- Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation Discuss both views and give you 78
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66502463054 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42221312163 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.819147948 43.030603864 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.833333333 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8333333333 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219922188215 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113578750955 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694863867385 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142131089498 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545622411101 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.