The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students study in France Russia and America between 2000 and 2015

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The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students study in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015

The line graph illustrates how many Vietnamese students study in three countries, namely France, Russia and America over a period of 15 years starting in 2000.

Overall, the number of Vietnamese students study in France and America climbed considerably, the opposite was true for Russia. In 2000, America was the country seeing the smallest quantity of Vietnamese students but in 2015 America ranked first.

In the year 2000, there was an average of nearly 3 million Vietnamese people enrolling in Russia schools, in comparison with about 3.5 million and 1.5 million students studying in France and America respectively. Over the next 5 years, the number of Vietnamese people in America schools increased to over 2 million, while the figures for Russia and France schools fell by roughly 1 million per country.

From 2005 to 2015, America underwent an upward trend to 5 million Vietnamese learners, making it the country attracting the most Vietnamese students. The figure for France remained stable at around 2.5 million until 2010 when it began to rise exponentially to nearly 4.5 million in 2015. Meanwhile, Russia witnessed a slight decrease in Vietnamese learners, and hit the lowest point of nearly 2 million in 2010, before rising to about 2.5 million in 2015.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20873786408 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68302600117 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54854368932 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7885779285 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.125 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393166772356 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198789449278 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905504285978 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270151581231 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909530809374 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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