The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...highest number of consumption for a meal in the beginning years, while fish had t...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
...er week by European people in your 1979.That time , Fish had Over one-fourthover 50...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y European people in your 1979.That time , Fish had Over one-fourthover 50 grams ...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...European people in your 1979.That time , Fish had Over one-fourthover 50 grams us...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rthover 50 grams used for eating. While, over time use of beef was slightly down ...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... also less use for eating after the year 1987 and goes down from just under 250g...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...less use for eating after the year 1987 and goes down from just under 250grams p...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...over 100 grams per week in the year 2004 .fish had almost 50 grams per week remain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33582089552 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0905550771 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462686567164 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.540235739 43.030603864 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.25 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 5.23603664747 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144905135431 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745371806947 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533863094764 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119889044767 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063921724232 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.82 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.4 10.3012195122 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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