The graph below shows the consumption of spreads from 1981 to 2007.
The line graph indicates the amount of three kinds of spreads (margarine, butter and low fat and reduced spreads) which were consumed over a period of 26 years. Units are measured in grams.
Overall, it is evident that the consumption of margarine and butter generally declined over the period given, while that of low fat & reduced spreads rose. In the first year, butter was the most popular spread, which was replaced by margarine from 1991 to 2001. And, following that low fat and reduced spreads was the most widely used spread in the final years.
At the beginning of the period, there was a steady increase in the proportion of butter from just over 140 grams and peaked at under 160 grams in 1986. After which the consumption of butter plunged to a low of about 50 grams. Likewise, that of margarine fluctuated at somewhere between 80 and 100 grams prior to 1991. In 1991, it remained relatively stable of 100 before dropping dramatically to 40 grams.
On the other hand, the expenditure of low fat and reduced only started at approximately 10 grams in 1996 and then reached a high of marginally above 80 grams in 2001. And then, the expenditure of low fat and reduced slightly spreads had a downward trend from just over 80 in 2001 to 40 grams in 2007.
- The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 61
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- The graph below shows the consumption of spreads from 1981 to 2007. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and peaked at under 160 grams in 1986. After which the consumption of butter plunged...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, likewise, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66964285714 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48422579042 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508928571429 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2158197984 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0909090909 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1537042822 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616535287771 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538850734194 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985493126619 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391388682311 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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