Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. Agree or disagree?
Movement, nowadays, takes an essential role in daily routine from home to workplace, and vice verse. Using personal or public transport depends on purpose or financial condition that helps people having an effective working day. A giant number of transporters together with that number of vehicles increase the extremely serious environmental problems. So governments should alter the infrastructure, especially railways.
Due to the convenience of private transports leads to the congestion of traffic tripled in the rush hour than the off-peak hour according to the latest news on VTV3. Every day, the amount of smog is released into the air causing the extremely serious pollution. People must face with breath in the dirty air, which easily harms their lung, heart and even their life, as a consequence, a thousand of people died because of cancer from lacking public’s awareness of protecting the atmosphere.
In the hustle and bustle life, people cannot avoid moving from a place to another place in a long distance. Along with that, the toll is a compulsory fee that people must charge for repairing and building the transportation system. Traveling by public vehicles, specified railways, helps people reduce or minimize the entire extra fee instead of using personal means. It is not only the cheapest way but also the most safety transport for commuters.
In conclusion, governments need to investigate more on public transport in order to reduce the press on environment meaning the death rate will be decreased dramatically. Besides that, saving a great amount of money in reconstruction the other roads system and also reducing the unnecessary fee to utilize for other respective future purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'roads'' or 'road's'?
Suggestion: roads'; road's
...nt of money in reconstruction the other roads system and also reducing the unnecessar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36900369004 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91750568735 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1658422926 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0487790626062 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191821926368 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375299405864 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0299286276873 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211482699269 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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