The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph compares the amount of wheat exported by different areas in the period from 1885 to 1990.
Overall, it can be seen that there was a fluctuation in the number of wheat exported by all three areas. However, after the middle of 1988, European Community overtook the others as the largest wheat exports.
Turning to details, in 1985, 15 million tons is exported on wheat by Australia, which is the lowest amount in all areas. Regarding Canada and European Community, the figure were little similar, at about 17 million tons and 19 million tons, respectively.
Despite some fluctuations, Canada’s wheat exports continued to be higher than by others through three years. By 1986, it started to rise significantly and reached a peak at 25 million tons in 1988 while the figure for Australia and the other were only at over 12 million tons and 15 million tons respectively.
After that, there was a dramatic change that the total number of wheat exported by Canada rapidly decreased and dropped to its lowest point in 1989, at under 15 million tons before increasing again. As for Australia, there was a similar trend when the figure continued to go down to around 11 million tons and remained at this point until 1990. In contrast, European Community’s exports experienced a gradual increase and reached the highest point at over 20 million tons in 1990.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, while, as for, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94805194805 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70313651546 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528138528139 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0947289489 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133257676169 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070081467698 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555300585328 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991905269676 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051222043829 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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