The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
the line graph illustrates the differences of exporting wheat in three places.
Overall, it is clear that the exportation increased from 1985 to 1990 in European community, while Australia witnessed a fall of wheat export over the five-year period.Canada market fluctuated considerably.
Looking at Australia, the number of wheat stayed at 15 tonnes in 1985 and the following year the number increased by only million to 16 million.After that , a gradual decrease was seen in Australia from 1986 to until 1989 when it remained around 11 millions tonnes.Moving to European community, it is a different picture.Over the same period, whereas Australian export rose and declined , the european community fell to about 14 millions of tonnes in 1986 and then increased slowly to 1989.In 1990, the number of wheat export in European community skyrocketed to slightly 21 millions tonnes which was two times higher than the number in Australia.
Canada'export started at nearly under 20 millions in 1985 , fell to 17 millions in 1986 , reached a peak of 25 millions in 1988 , dropped dramatically to 14 millions in 1989 and began increasing to 19 millions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22282608696 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0753077873 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 215.58640959 43.030603864 501% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.25 112.824112599 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 22.9334400587 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106062872036 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111532544341 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111495644 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111532544341 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111495644 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.2329268293 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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