The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
The depicted bar chart illustrates the proportion of female unemployment among 4 different countries of the United Kingdom in the year of 2013 and 2014.
Overall, England and Scotland was more dominant in the number of female who didn't have job than the remain countries. Besides, The female unemployment rate accounted for a slight decrease from 2013 to 2014, except in the Scotland.
As can be seen from the chart, in 2003, 5.6 percent female in the North Ireland was unemployment, the rate of this county fall down and hit the bottom of chart with 4.6 percent after 1 year. Similarly, the percentage of the Wales stood at 5.4 percent in 2003, over 1 year, it dropped down to 5.0 percent.
England came with the greatest percentage accounting for 6.8 percent in 2013. However, 1 year later, this number experienced a slight declined by 0.3 percent to 6.5 percent and peak at the second place in the year. Whereas, the Scotland was on the opposite, this saw an increase by 0.6 percent from 6.1 percent in 2013 to 6.7 percent in 2014, making it become making it to become the country with the highest female unemployment rate of the four countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...re dominant in the number of female who didnt have job than the remain countries. Bes...
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Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
... in the number of female who didnt have job than the remain countries. Besides, The...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...umber of female who didnt have job than the remain countries. Besides, The female unemploy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, second, similarly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74129353234 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58207517323 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542288557214 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5173937882 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221361343483 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116790518403 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122749620201 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177427743096 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115626225674 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.