The graph below shows information about the number of tourists visited different parts of the world.
The given is a line graph provided that the information about international visits o tourists from different points of the world over a 15 years period from 1990 to 2005 and it is measured in numbers (million).
Overall, it can be seen that there were a up ward trend in all continents. But the most higher rates shown by North America and certain points of Europe. However, South-East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa and South America could not show huge numbers. They are explaining up ward trend during also during the period.
Looking at the details, in 1990 visitors of North America stood at 70 millions people. Furthermore, It was up ward over a decade. But from 2005 it had fallen to 1 million and stopped at 90 millions people. On the other hand, Centre and Eastern Europe have shown 30 millions in the beginning of the period. However, this point rose sharply and at the end achieved nearly the same number with North America.
By contrast, also other 3 parts of the world have been development at visits of tourists. South-East Asia stood at 20 millions people in the starting point. Furthermore, it rose gradually without fluctuations and in 2005 it has achieved to 50 millions. Sub-Saharan Africa and South America have started their trend in the same level but Sub-Saharan Africa rose to 20 millions and South American trend less than it to 5 millions visitors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a million
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Suggestion: higher
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... to 20 millions and South American trend less than it to 5 millions visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83898305085 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61234226098 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8201332909 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5714285714 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131108845625 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411079107209 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909520758247 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106348005867 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131322729293 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.