Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Job is an important part of people's life, because most people spend much of their time on job. Some people think that enjoying from their job is far more important than a good salary, although earning much money is an main way of a good life for others. In my opinion, having an enjoyable job is more important.
On the one hand, a good salary helps people to live better. By this I mean that people can afford to buy what they want. Furthermore, some people do not want to work, as long as they have less salary than they desire. Because job is the way of earning money for many people and they think that having a good salary is more important than other things.
On the other hand, most people want to enjoy from job that they do. People spend the huge amount of their life on job, so they think that enjoying their job is far more important. Providing that people enjoy and satisfy from their job, they can achieve success in job.
In conclusion, even though many people argue that having an enjoyable job is more important than earning a lot of money, other people disagree with this idea. However, I approve this idea and I think people should work in job that they enjoy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... salary, although earning much money is an main way of a good life for others. In ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... job, they can achieve success in job. In conclusion, even though many people a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, i mean, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43378995434 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05744121782 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452054794521 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8018198758 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9166666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458253402727 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209894918384 0.084324248473 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113657892323 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320043748936 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810483062043 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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