Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prisons.
Why is this?
What consequences this can have on society?
The acts of recommitting crime among ex-prisoners are common in all parts of the world. There can be a couple of reasons why this happens, and the consequences are highly negative for societies. Difficulties in becaming a part of community and poor rehabilitation in prisons are probable reasons behind this.
The first reason who people commit crimes again can be the people's reluctancy to accept them after they are set free from prisons. To be more precise, they cannot find jobs, because of their criminal record in most cases. In fact, employers donot want to risk their reputation and property by employing former criminals. As a result, they are forced to continue the illegal activities to earn for a living. This results in rising crime rates in society which makes people feel unsafe.
The second possible reason is that prisons are not serving as a tool to change inmates to the good side, instead prisoners learn from each other. In other words, people who committed petty crimes are kept with other serious criminals, which lead them deeper into crime world. Whenever they are released, they are likely to experiment what they have learnt in prisons. Consequently, they are imprisoned again, making jails full with robbers, burglars and murderers.
To conclude, reasons behind this issue are clear, and consequences are extremely significant for society and individuals as well. In my opinion governments should reorganize the prison system, and then, people can ve persuaded that former prisoners are trustworthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, then, well, in fact, as a result, in most cases, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68412198119 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627530364372 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1810706788 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338644848488 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100267172495 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548799301827 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188822795488 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165553388472 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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