The graph illustrates the long-term migration of Britain people to other countries and other people into the UK from 1990 to 2008.
According to the graph, in 1999, the number of immigration was under 500 thousands being higher than emigration's number by around 150 thousands. Immigration showed fluctuations in between 1999 and 2007 after which it increased slightly from just under 600 thousands to nearly 600 thousands. Similarly, emigration experienced oscillations for over a period of 3 years and remained stable at almost 350 thousands people from 2002 to 2003. During 2003-2007, it showed palpitations and rose rapidly to just over 300 thousands people in 2008.
As observed from the bar graph, in 1999, below 200 thousands people migrated from and to Britain which continued almost same in between 1999 and 2003. After that, it's number was nearly doubled in 2004 which was the highest number over the period. It fell slowly to slightly over 200 thousands people and there was no change for two years. Finally, the figure reached to below 200 thousands in the end of the period.
Overall, immigration was the largest in the beginning and in the end of the period. Most of the people migrated in the year 2004 whereas the least number moved in 2003.
- IELTS 10 Test 3 Writing Task 1 - Academic 11
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- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade - labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. 67
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he long-term migration of Britain people to other countries and other people into...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, similarly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58991622359 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492890995261 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.266441862 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9090909091 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123361936649 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515563300184 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557459938053 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890404465563 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549874794295 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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