The graph below shows the number of enquiries recieved by the tourist information office in one city over a six month period in 2011

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The graph below shows the number of enquiries recieved by the tourist information office in one city over a six month period in 2011

The linear chart illustrates the tourist information office was received the number of enquiries in person, by letter or email and by telephone in one city from january to june in 2011.
Overall, it is clearly visible from the chart number of enquiries in person and by telephone was increasing steadily whereas, number of enquiries by the letter and email decreased.
Primarily, it is vividly apparent that in the first month the figure of enquiries in person near by 400 enquiries which counting were lower than by letter or email and telephone enquiries it noticed at 800 and 900 enquiries. In February all enquiries were inclined but after that, the enquiries by email or letter declined rapidly. In june month it reached on 400 enquiries.
furthermost, count of enquiries by telephone stay 1,000 enquiries in march and april but, in June it went up gradually at 1600 enquiries. At the same time, the enquiries by the person rose up rapidly and touch the peak 1900 enquiries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...month the figure of enquiries in person near by 400 enquiries which counting were lower...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermost
...une month it reached on 400 enquiries. furthermost, count of enquiries by telephone stay 1...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92168674699 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67611625309 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506024096386 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7824915224 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209793587785 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107361568077 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794814426883 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149103107382 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852928143934 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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