The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The given graph presents data about the number of foreign tourists from a European country who visited three different areas in this country over a period of 20 years from 1987 to 2007. An overall view indicates that the number of visitors has increased.
First of all, as can be seen, the coast was the most popular area for visitors in 1987, by 40 thousand visitors. Despite the reduction in the number of people who preferred to spend their time at the beach, in 1992 (around 35), from 1992 to 2007, there is an upward trend which shows that the number of visitors has boosted sharply and reached to more than 70 thousand.
On the other hand, in 1987, the mountains were the second popular area for visitors by 20 thousand people, which was twice more than the number of visitors to the lake. However, there is a slight increase in a number of the mountains’ visitors through the mentioned period, there is a significant rise in the number of people who visited the lake. This figure peaked at 75 thousand in 2000 and then experienced a sharp downward trend which reaches to 50 thousand in 2007.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, then, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65989847716 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40543802306 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548223350254 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1717482915 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324922151318 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142669425849 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088991693012 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23459789736 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943311279006 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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