You have recently been on a business trip to see some equipment that your company needs. Write a letter to the company that owns this equipment and say
- Describe the equipment
- Ask for the features and specification of this equipment
- Explain why your company needs this equipment
Dear Dr. Jakson,
I am writing to ask if you are so generous to provide me some information about one of your products that I have seen during my visit from your factory.
To begin with, according to the field of the company I am working in, we are going to buy a vacuum furnace. The furnace that I evaluate during my visit is the last model that you have produced which is able to reach about 1300 C temperature. Its chamber size is 150 * 150 Cm and is able to work with Argon as well.
To evaluate its performance to ensure that it can meet our needs, we need more information including technical specification and manual instruction. I would also like to know other properties of the equipment that we can use.
As I told before, our company is a Gas Turbine Blade manufacturer and for casting the component we need a vacuum furnace with the capability to reach higher temperatures.
I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and consideration. Yours Sincerely, Yalda Asgari.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66847826087 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79404563587 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5407912735 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199511319691 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689565668336 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437023356118 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885484520217 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425363417492 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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